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[Written by Raoul Khan for Love Ladder]
If you love someone because
You think that he or she is really gorgeous...
Then it's not love..
It's - INFATUATION. . .
If you love someone because
You think that you shouldn't leave him because
Others think that you shouldn't ...
Then it's not love..
It's - COMPROMISE. . .
If you love someone because
You think that you cannot live without his touch ....
Then it's not love ..
It's - LUST. . .
If you love someone because
You have been kissed by him ...
Then it's not love..
It's - INFERIORITY COMPLEX. . .
If you love someone because
You cannot leave him thinking that it would hurt his feelings ..
Then it's not love ..
It's - CHARITY. . .
If you love someone because
You share everything with him ..
Then it's not love..
It's - FRIENDSHIP.
But if you feel the pain of the other person
More than him/her even when he/she is stable
and you cry for him/her ..
That's - LOVE
LOVE is strong yet delicate. It can be broken. To truly LOVE is to understand this. To be in LOVE is to respect this...
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What is your idea of love?
10 comments:
Very well written, Raoul. One of Love's facet captured beautifully by you. Love still is a much of a mystery though. ;)
Thank you for choosing Love Ladder to pen your thoughts. Quite humbled. You are welcome to write more.
ok, on behalf of one of my Twitter followers and a nice person who read ur work had something to say but dinn't wanna comment on it here.
So I'm doing it on his behalf.
He said he loved it except for the last stanza. It's making the entire work look..not so good..because of the 2/stable used in it - (him/her - he/she). Would you like to make changes in it? If you do,let Imp's Mom know. Thanx.
Cool verses...!!
The last verse does it for me!! :)
'love'ly poem!!!!!! The last verse is my idea of true love!!!! Imp's mom I take your permission to add few lines in my comment to your beautiful verse:
"love is found in the most unlikely places"
" love is the most beautiful feeling till it happens to your daughter".(hehehe).
This poem will certainly help me find my love!!
wink..........y!!
No changes needed!!! A poem mirrors the feelings recollected in tramquility!!!!!!! A poem should be enjoyed and not to be judged!!!!!!!! so imp's mom you rock!!
tranquility*
@Anand: Raoul has written it very well and he continues to do so :)
@Aarti: the last verse did it for me too :)
@Ankita: Thank you! But I did not write this poem, its written by a friend of mine, Raoul. Agree with your first line, the second one not too much and I hope the third one comes true ;-) And you are most welcome to pen ur own lines here!
hey , thanks Imp's mom!! Actually, I read the name "raoul" but thought Imp's mom is a nick name for it!! Anwaysssssss,just for Raoul Khan in MNIK sharukhan style " Your name is khan and you have written a beautiful poem""!!!!
haha ankita I blog under a nick, don't use my real name
will def pass on ur msg to Raoul :)
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